This silence.. It's so hard to break
Ah! And, I have to put everything on stake...
I wish I could ever Open my Heart..
And let you know...
Why did you go AWAY...
Oh Please, NO!
Every time we talk
It's like an eternal walk
I Really Really want the time to stop!
And, the IRONY of it
When you were close, I never uttered a bit.
I have so much to tell and so much to say
And, I always wanted you to stay
The moment you say Yes Dear,
Don't know what I Fear.
And, shattered and scared, I wonder, this SILENCE...
Why??? It's so hard to break!
P.S. Thanks for all your love on the first attempt...here's the second...:)
37 comments:
another good one...keep writing girl....one day publish all your poems into one book...
@Varun: Thanks a million again...believe me I feel gald from the bottom of my heart hearing that from First Blogo Buddy (^_^)
good one. keep it up
This is one outshines the first :)
well put lines ,keep em comin..
cheers !!!
good one priya..keep them coming..:))
Nice theme of your blog. I love pink color...:) Very beautiful words from your side. Keep writing.
Hey Priya !! You rock sweety... the poem is sooo good...
@Dr. Chandana Shekar: Thanks for appreciating (*_*)
@Sat_hi_sh: hey Really...Thanks so much! Keep visiting...
@Sovina: Thanks Dear!
@Ann: U are My Vodka on Rocks (lolz)...Thanks a million for reading and appreciating...
@Megha Chhatbar: Thanks Megha! FINALLY...Someone "NOTICED" the change...thanks again for appreciating whatever I write...Keep Visiting...C Ya :)
Really a nice post and blog. Priya regularly post such good new posts. All readers can also visit my website http://www.manomaystore.com
thanks for your comment ;) it´s a really nice idea from you to open a blog with selfwritten poems.
greetz from berlin!
http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/
The first that stares at me with this piece are the exclamation marks.
Just how many you've used them?! Otherwise, a good read.
And thanks for dropping by.
Beautiful poem, keep writing.
The rhyming is beautiful and the expression is wonderful.
Regards
Blasphemous Aesthete
@katjusha: you're welcome, thanks for dropping by...keep visiting :)
@Cinderella: Thanks for you suggestion...(always most welcomed)...
@Anonymous Someone: Thanks...Welcome to my place :)
Ah, the irony of not being able to speak when that person is close to you, and then cursing yourself for not doing so when that person goes far away.. Nicely composed ma'am.
@The Enduring Spirit: Thanks a ton for liking and appreciating...do keep visiting...(^_^)
So beautiful* & passionate!
Blessings.
Sincerely,
-Joie Schmidt.
@Joie Schmidt: Hey Joie...a warm welcome to my place and thanks a million for dropping by and appreciating :)
This is nice ... as in VERY nice, Priyanka!
hey thanks for your lovely comments on my posts..i heart them so much..thanks :)
@Sovina: You have such a wonderful blog dear...thanks to you for all that you do :)
@The Old Silly: Awww...thanks for appreciating (^_^)
Hey Priyanka - stop by my blog - you won the contest!
Silence is golden, at times it's better not to say much! :)
Loved your prose! :)
Balle balle kara ditti tusin .. Kya baat hai .. beautiful ...
Thank you so much for your comment, darling! That means so much to me!!
Hope you'll visit me again)
Marika
and check out my new project - Story of my Clothes
@The Old Silly: wooo....hoo...i am super excited...thanks a million dude...
@Sourav C. Pandey: Agreed...may be it's for good too...thanks a million for dropping by and liking...:)
@Bikramjit: Shukriya...twadah..Mann Sahib :)
@Marika: You're Welcome Dear! Thanks to u too for dropping...Will definitely check ur New Project :)
hey thanks priya for your sweet comment on my blog..you are always so generous with your comments..just wanted to say thanks
(and waiting for you new post too :))
Love
Sovina
http://weddingonthecards.blogspot.com/
dear Cutie priya! :) firstly u have a very sweet name!
now coming to your post...
hmm... u know what when feelings are true, the unknown fear of what shall happen if we disclose our emotions...comes in natural! and judgin by ur write ups, ur a real good human being and thus...ur thoughts are so pure, so cute and so within ur heart they stay :) but expression is all of important sis! make that sure...when u meet this poem boy, which inspires ur pen( m sure there is), then do tell him... that "read my blog...bas!" and that shall do the needful ;)
god bless sis!
tc!!
thanks priya! i´m always happy to see you commenting on my site...
apropos your poems. you should publish an e-book :)
http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/
@Sovina: I feel so good when u visit...Ur elegance and the nice work is always commendable...will write soon.
Love,
Priya:)
@PULKIT: Hey Pulkit! Thanks for liking the name...(you're the first one to say that WOW)...Trust me I've been following your Blog and your writing is so "DEEP" and Emotional...Keep Penning those wonderful write-ups...I love reading them...
I wish I could meet this Guy I LIKE...I've already expressed my feelings to him and told him about my blog...but he's kinda BUSY Guy...(am keeping my Fingers Crossed)
Wish you tons of LUCK!
Cheers,
Priya :)
@katjusha: hey katjusha...how are you? Even I am happy to c u coming on my blog DEAR...thanks a million for 'appreciating'...wow publishing an e-book is an AMAZING IDEA...Keep visiting...
Love,
Priya :)
hey sweets..just wanted to thank u for your lovely lovely comments on my blog..they mean a lot..thanks :)
love
sovina
@Sovina: You're always Welcome Dear :)
Thank for comment darling! It means so much to me!
WHat an amazing poem! You are a talent!!
Please, don't forget my works! ;)
Marika
and check out my new project - Story of my Clothes
@Marika: You're Welcome dear! Thanks for reading and appreciating...Will keep vising your place :)
lovely poem!
even lovelier blog! :)
@pooja: Thanks Pooja...Thanks for dropping by..keep coming
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