Wednesday, May 12, 2010

I am Waiting For...


I am Waiting For...


The Spring to come again...
The birds to sing Again...

I am Waiting...
To hear and be heard...
To Love and to be loved...

The day I saw you...
You took me by...
The Reason, can’t explain why...

I wish I could ever tell you and scream...
It's only YOU about whom I Dream...

I wish you could Understand...
That I want to be with you till the END...
And, standing at the Doorway Sad and Alone...
I want you to be Back home...

And, yes it’s you I am WAITING For


P.S
...My first attempt, even if you find it kiddish or funny...you're are most welcome to criticize


31 comments:

King said...

No body understands until you tell them...
Take your time don't be in hurry "Rather Be Alone Than Be With the Wrong Person"

Varun said...

aaaah...some...

and we are waiting for you to write on your blog more often.

Ak said...

This is great. Seriously i loved reading every bit of it.

As every poem is related directly to the poets current emotions, by reading this i guess u are single and u are looking for love.. But dear, love dont come just like that. You dont wait for love. You hunt for love.

This is great.. To me a good poem should be short, entertaining and should be able to potray the poet's feelings and emotions and this has it all. Good job!

CutePriya said...

@King: yes buddy, i am waiting for the RIGHT PERSON

@Ak: I can't believe it's coming from you...thanks...i am glad u enjoyed reading :)

@Varun: It's always good to see that my FIRST BlogoBuddy is always there to read...will keep posting :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

good attempt..you wrote well :)

Keep Blogging

CutePriya said...

@An Ordinary Gal: Thank ya :)

Indrayani said...

Thanks for the comment on my blog..
Hope your stresses at work smooth out soon and so do mine!
:)sucks..doesnt it..?
Thanks for the kind words...
All Izzz well...! :)

I liked this poem too..very emotional ...and the longing is very obvious in the words....
Will look forward to more poems from you!

Vintage Obsession said...

oh you write poetry as well !! lovely :) well said :)

RepublicOfChic said...

It's great for a first attempt! :)

RepublicOfChic said...

It's great for a first attempt! :)

CutePriya said...

@Indrayani: You're Welcome :)....Yes, I wish the stress eases out...thanks for liking the pom...will try for writing better ones :)

@Vintage Obsession: my first attempt...thanks ^_^

@RepublicOfChic: thanks a ton sweetie!

Ann said...

Very Well written Priya.. It was so good, that I can't believe that you have written a poem for the first time. Well, I will wait for some more poems in near future..

Till later,
Take care,
Ann

Anonymous said...

u will get soon the somebody special...believe in yourself and the god :)

CutePriya said...

@Ann: He..he..thanks Ann for appreciating...will try writing more

@Anonymous: :)...I do Believe...

Bikramjit Singh Mann said...

well put it this way Your first attempt is better then my millionth or thousands of first timers .. So BRAVO

at least you had the guts to write and post .. a few like me cant do that tooo.. So Well done..

and All the best for SOMEONE RIGHT... :) god willing you will

CutePriya said...

Oh gosh! Thanks Bikramjit for those kind words...he..he...i am sure you write good ones...not d kind of kiddish I write...

Thanks...yes, i am waiting for that someone right..please pray for me :)

nitwit said...

nice poem

Niraj said...

Hey good way to start..gr8 attempt..keep going

HaRy!! said...

well if yu really are waiting for, am sure yu shud send this! ... damn sure the wait will be over with bliss

HaRy

CutePriya said...

@nitwit: thanks or liking and dropping by gurl :)

@Niraj: Thanks a ton :)

@HaRy!! : thanks will do that :)

Sat_hi_sh said...

Wow...Ur post looked pretty serious...
Are you ????

CutePriya said...

@Sat_hi_sh: Thanks for that Wow man...Yeah, I am quite serious

Vij@ソ said...

is it ur first attempt really not look like. Quite a good piece of writing.
:)

CutePriya said...

@Vij@ソ: Thanks a ton for visiting and appreciating :)

Sovina said...

Hey Priya..stopping by to say what a lovely log you have..and you write really well..I dont know if i would be ever able to put my thoughts like this..Thanks for stopping by the blog and joining it.
Keep rocking :)

CutePriya said...

@Sovina: I am so very glad to hear that...you really made my day Sovina...thanks a ton, million for dropping by

katjusha said...

hey! thank you, i´m always happy to get a new follower :) I really like the thing you wrote in your profile, that it´s sometimes hard to express yourself right in the reality but inside you have so much in your mind. that´s kind of true. Blogging is an advantage to be able to express yourself and maybe not to get misunderstood right away.

greetz from Berlin ;)

http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/

Baljinder Singh said...

I must say it was a nice attempt....
nice poem...:)

katjusha said...

wow it´s corageous to post your poem on blogspot... but you know, don´t be afraid of the reactions. Feedback of people will always be split. It´s an emotional poem, nice :)

greetz from Berlin/germany!

http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/

CutePriya said...

@Baljinder Singh: Thanks so much for appreciating...keep visiting dude :)

@katjusha: yes dear! Feedback really helps...thanks a ton for appreciating and visiting...greetings...Priya

Nikita said...

waiting for...lovely post....