Monday, June 14, 2010

This Silence...

This silence..
It's so hard to break

Ah! And, I have to put everything on stake...

I wish I could ever Open my Heart..

And let you know...

Why did you go AWAY...
Oh Please, NO!


Every time we talk

It's like an eternal walk

I Really Really want the time to stop!


And, the IRONY of it

When you were close, I never uttered a bit.

I have so much to tell and so much to say
And, I always wanted you to stay

The moment you say Yes Dear,

Don't know what I Fear.


And, shattered and scared, I wonder, this SILENCE...
Why???
It's so hard to break!

P.S. Thanks for all your love on the first attempt...here's the second...:)


37 comments:

Varun said...

another good one...keep writing girl....one day publish all your poems into one book...

CutePriya said...

@Varun: Thanks a million again...believe me I feel gald from the bottom of my heart hearing that from First Blogo Buddy (^_^)

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

good one. keep it up

Sat_hi_sh said...

This is one outshines the first :)
well put lines ,keep em comin..
cheers !!!

Sovina said...

good one priya..keep them coming..:))

Megha Chhatbar said...

Nice theme of your blog. I love pink color...:) Very beautiful words from your side. Keep writing.

Ann said...

Hey Priya !! You rock sweety... the poem is sooo good...

CutePriya said...

@Dr. Chandana Shekar: Thanks for appreciating (*_*)

@Sat_hi_sh: hey Really...Thanks so much! Keep visiting...

@Sovina: Thanks Dear!

@Ann: U are My Vodka on Rocks (lolz)...Thanks a million for reading and appreciating...

CutePriya said...

@Megha Chhatbar: Thanks Megha! FINALLY...Someone "NOTICED" the change...thanks again for appreciating whatever I write...Keep Visiting...C Ya :)

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katjusha said...

thanks for your comment ;) it´s a really nice idea from you to open a blog with selfwritten poems.

greetz from berlin!

http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/

Cinderella said...

The first that stares at me with this piece are the exclamation marks.

Just how many you've used them?! Otherwise, a good read.

And thanks for dropping by.

Anonymous Someone said...

Beautiful poem, keep writing.

The rhyming is beautiful and the expression is wonderful.

Regards

Blasphemous Aesthete

CutePriya said...

@katjusha: you're welcome, thanks for dropping by...keep visiting :)

@Cinderella: Thanks for you suggestion...(always most welcomed)...

@Anonymous Someone: Thanks...Welcome to my place :)

The Enduring Spirit said...

Ah, the irony of not being able to speak when that person is close to you, and then cursing yourself for not doing so when that person goes far away.. Nicely composed ma'am.

CutePriya said...

@The Enduring Spirit: Thanks a ton for liking and appreciating...do keep visiting...(^_^)

Joie Schmidt said...

So beautiful* & passionate!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.

CutePriya said...

@Joie Schmidt: Hey Joie...a warm welcome to my place and thanks a million for dropping by and appreciating :)

The Old Silly said...

This is nice ... as in VERY nice, Priyanka!

Sovina said...

hey thanks for your lovely comments on my posts..i heart them so much..thanks :)

CutePriya said...

@Sovina: You have such a wonderful blog dear...thanks to you for all that you do :)

CutePriya said...

@The Old Silly: Awww...thanks for appreciating (^_^)

The Old Silly said...

Hey Priyanka - stop by my blog - you won the contest!

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Silence is golden, at times it's better not to say much! :)

Loved your prose! :)

Bikramjit said...

Balle balle kara ditti tusin .. Kya baat hai .. beautiful ...

Marika said...

Thank you so much for your comment, darling! That means so much to me!!
Hope you'll visit me again)

Marika
and check out my new project - Story of my Clothes

CutePriya said...

@The Old Silly: wooo....hoo...i am super excited...thanks a million dude...

@Sourav C. Pandey: Agreed...may be it's for good too...thanks a million for dropping by and liking...:)

@Bikramjit: Shukriya...twadah..Mann Sahib :)

@Marika: You're Welcome Dear! Thanks to u too for dropping...Will definitely check ur New Project :)

Sovina said...

hey thanks priya for your sweet comment on my blog..you are always so generous with your comments..just wanted to say thanks
(and waiting for you new post too :))

Love
Sovina
http://weddingonthecards.blogspot.com/

PULKIT said...

dear Cutie priya! :) firstly u have a very sweet name!

now coming to your post...
hmm... u know what when feelings are true, the unknown fear of what shall happen if we disclose our emotions...comes in natural! and judgin by ur write ups, ur a real good human being and thus...ur thoughts are so pure, so cute and so within ur heart they stay :) but expression is all of important sis! make that sure...when u meet this poem boy, which inspires ur pen( m sure there is), then do tell him... that "read my blog...bas!" and that shall do the needful ;)
god bless sis!
tc!!

katjusha said...

thanks priya! i´m always happy to see you commenting on my site...

apropos your poems. you should publish an e-book :)

http://katjushadawaiii.blogspot.com/

CutePriya said...

@Sovina: I feel so good when u visit...Ur elegance and the nice work is always commendable...will write soon.

Love,
Priya:)


@PULKIT: Hey Pulkit! Thanks for liking the name...(you're the first one to say that WOW)...Trust me I've been following your Blog and your writing is so "DEEP" and Emotional...Keep Penning those wonderful write-ups...I love reading them...

I wish I could meet this Guy I LIKE...I've already expressed my feelings to him and told him about my blog...but he's kinda BUSY Guy...(am keeping my Fingers Crossed)

Wish you tons of LUCK!

Cheers,
Priya :)

@katjusha: hey katjusha...how are you? Even I am happy to c u coming on my blog DEAR...thanks a million for 'appreciating'...wow publishing an e-book is an AMAZING IDEA...Keep visiting...

Love,
Priya :)

Sovina said...

hey sweets..just wanted to thank u for your lovely lovely comments on my blog..they mean a lot..thanks :)

love
sovina

CutePriya said...

@Sovina: You're always Welcome Dear :)

Marika said...

Thank for comment darling! It means so much to me!

WHat an amazing poem! You are a talent!!
Please, don't forget my works! ;)
Marika
and check out my new project - Story of my Clothes

CutePriya said...

@Marika: You're Welcome dear! Thanks for reading and appreciating...Will keep vising your place :)

Pooja said...

lovely poem!

even lovelier blog! :)

CutePriya said...

@pooja: Thanks Pooja...Thanks for dropping by..keep coming